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#1 Laval

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Posted 07 September 2018 - 06:18 PM

In April 2018, I was very fortunate to participate in the Ray of Hope Expedition to the Revillagigedos Islands, off the coast of Mexico. The expedition was organized by Dr. Andrea Marshall – a National Geographic Explorer and the ‘Queen of Mantas'.

 

Here is a link to my 4-min video-report about this trip: https://youtu.be/dJKKAWb0Efs

 

This is my first video after moving from iMovie to Final Cut Pro.

 

Camera: Sony A7Rii, Housing Ikelite, lens 28mm with fisheye.

I did not use lights, and did not use any filters.

 

I will appreciate your constructive criticism.

 

Thank you.

 

 

 

 

 

 



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Posted 11 September 2018 - 10:21 AM

Some very nice shots. Well done!  

 

This is perfectly watchable as-is, but I assume you took the shots pretty much as they came out of the camera?  The shots look very blue, so I'd try to adjust the white balance a bit in post. Some blown out highlights on the white belly of the mantas, but I know their skin is very reflective and this happens easily.  Again, I'd try to play a bit with the exposure in the midtones and highlights in FCPX.

 

Of course it always depends how much time you want spend getting a clip out, but if your looking for constructive comments, these two points may be worth playing with.

 

NB: I love how that morey eal spit out that sea urchin :-)


Edited by bubffm, 11 September 2018 - 10:26 AM.


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Posted 12 September 2018 - 12:30 PM

Bring the saturation of the blues down a bit and it will give it a more natural look. Nice video!



#4 Laval

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Posted 13 September 2018 - 05:01 PM

Some very nice shots. Well done!  

 

This is perfectly watchable as-is, but I assume you took the shots pretty much as they came out of the camera?  The shots look very blue, so I'd try to adjust the white balance a bit in post. Some blown out highlights on the white belly of the mantas, but I know their skin is very reflective and this happens easily.  Again, I'd try to play a bit with the exposure in the midtones and highlights in FCPX.

 

Of course it always depends how much time you want spend getting a clip out, but if your looking for constructive comments, these two points may be worth playing with.

 

NB: I love how that morey eal spit out that sea urchin :-)

 

Many thanks, bubffm. I appreciate your comments. I will try to play with the footage as per your recommendations.



#5 Laval

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Posted 13 September 2018 - 05:28 PM

Bring the saturation of the blues down a bit and it will give it a more natural look. Nice video!

Hey Kire70.  I appreciate your comment and advise.  I will try adjusting the saturation.  By the way, could you recommend any tutorials for underwater video editing? 







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