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#1 Elli and Ted

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Posted 06 April 2007 - 12:52 AM

Hi All, In June our town is holding its "Kunstsommer" (Summer of Art) The theme is "Painting with Light", I have been asked to present about 30 UW photos :ninja:
Here are two pic's I need some advice on. I think Ive got the aperture and timing right, but whats bothering me is the "subject" and composition.

Both Pics : Tokina 10-17 at 10mm ISO 200 aperture 11 time 60th, Marsa Alam Red Sea
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Should I keep them

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#2 aczyzyk

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Posted 06 April 2007 - 01:56 AM

I like the second one more. It feels 3D.
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#3 loftus

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Posted 06 April 2007 - 02:58 AM

I also like the 2nd more, has more drama and depth. The first one, I feel I want to move the diver to the right, the composition is not ideal for me.
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#4 kriptap

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Posted 06 April 2007 - 03:16 AM

The first one does not give me a black and white feel about it, the second does, the first seems to have a more green'ish tint about it, may be that's what making it not quite right. :rolleyes:

#5 scubarobot

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Posted 04 July 2007 - 05:38 AM

The first one does not give me a black and white feel about it, the second does, the first seems to have a more green'ish tint about it, may be that's what making it not quite right. :)


I agree about the green cast...but I really like the shots. nice job! keep them :)

#6 Photobeat

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Posted 04 July 2007 - 06:25 AM

They are both great selections and look interesting in black and white there is just no real impact. I think they are a great choice to compliment your other shots and color shots but what is bothering you is impact, a real powerful subject in the composition. I like them both.
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