Posted 01 January 2009 - 05:21 AM
The first thing that is apparent to me is that the shots are underexposed, both the foreground and background (background not as bad in second pic).
Unlike macro, with WA you have to be considering both foreground (strobe) and backgound (ambient) exposures. Changing Aperture will affect both strobe and background exposure, changing shutter speed will only affect ambient exposure. Changing ISO will affect both.
In both shots the strobe appears under exposed - solutions are: Add a second strobe, get closer to the foreground you want to light, increase ISO, open up the aperture.
In the second shot you may want to keep the background exposure fairly close to the existing exposure, in which case if you open the aperture or increase ISO, you may have to have to increase shutter speed to avoid overexposure of the background.
I suspect your histogram indicates underexposure (shifted to the left)
Hope this helps.
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