Posted 14 December 2010 - 12:33 PM
In the 3rd shot, it might be improved if the strobe was futher to the right so it did not show in the photo. That would have the model lit but not see the distraction of the cone of light from the strobe. Just one man's opinion...maybe others like the cone being present.
Like others here, I really like the hair hightlights in photo 1...much like a studio highlight shot.
With that same theme in mind, a strong enough snoot light in photo 1, placed in upper right to highlight the top of her hair as well. Its done often in studio lighting, not so easy underwater but then if were easy - even I could do it. :-)
I am thinking the model in photo 1 would have a lovely smile if she had time to remove the regulator and smile for the camera. The reg could be hidden in her right hand with the hose behind her and out of sight. Just a thought, which was your request.
I think they are all quite nice.
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