Posted 08 July 2012 - 02:09 AM
Well I'll give you two cents Longi my man.
Firstly, dont get too upset if folks don't come back to you. :-)
It's the way things go on this prt. forum.
I think your picture tells a good story- and technically I dont see anything 'wrong' with what you did.
However, if I was there, I would have played with the compositional elements a bit more if I could- and I know given the moving elements of your scene this is hard to do!
I would have pulled the tokina out to 10mm to get a more spherical fisheye effect, gotton closer, and maybe gotten directly underneath your diver and shark.
Think of the silhouette possibilities and maybe interface the two with a sunburst maybe?? Or try a part sunburst using the boat hull, and the diver and shark??
I think change angle of attack, more fisheye, and get closer...???
Just thoughts
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