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#1 JDelage

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Posted 06 May 2014 - 01:37 PM

Hi,

 

This is a pic of one of the wrecks of the Daedalus reef in the Red Sea. I'd love to get some pointers on how to improve it. One of the problem I have is that I introduced noise in the water when I used the channel mixer to add back some reds.

 

The picture was taken with the Sony RX100ii in a Nauticam housing.

 

My best effort:

DSC00324a_small.jpg

 

 

 

Original JPG straight from the camera:

DSC00324_small.jpg

 

And a link to the RAW file here: http://jdelage.publi...ng/DSC00324.dng

 

Thank you,

 

Joss


Edited by JDelage, 06 May 2014 - 04:19 PM.


#2 jmauricio

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Posted 07 May 2014 - 06:09 AM

since you have the raw, I would say avoid the channel mixer. Multiple ways to skin the cat. I did this quickly in Lightroom 5

 

untitled%20%28Medium%29.jpg

Exposure +1.29

Temp: 20787

Tint: +150

Highlights -100,

Shadows +100,

Whites +24 

Blacks -60

Clarity +17

 

Saturation - to taste - strong agrument to leave it a little "blue" given that is what we see underwater and what the viewer might expect it to look like.

Reds: +81

Greens: -73

Aqua:  -39

Blues: -9

 

noise reduction

Luminance: +50

Color: +25

Sharpening +50

Masking: 90

 

and the spot healing brush on the diver and fish (Photoshop would have done a better job)

 

raw

https://dl.dropboxus...el/DSC00324.dng