Jump to content


Photo
- - - - -

advice on photo


  • Please log in to reply
4 replies to this topic

#1 clarkedje

clarkedje

    Damselfish

  • Member
  • Pip
  • 19 posts
  • Location:UK

Posted 22 November 2004 - 02:56 PM

hi, can anyone give me some constructive critiscism on this photo I took on my first Digtial underwater photography session in Sharm el Sheikh.
i was using a ricoh caplio rr30 in a sea and sea dx3000 housing.
any feedback would be most welcome
Thanx
Dom
http://www.clarkedje...views/23163.htm

#2 richorn

richorn

    Manta Ray

  • Member
  • PipPipPip
  • 462 posts
  • Location:Phoenix, AZ

Posted 22 November 2004 - 04:04 PM

I like the subject and the background, but the foreground is distracting and the fish is dead center. I would prefer this shot taken closer so as to reduce or eliminate the foreground entirely, and have the position of the fish on one of the "thirds".

As for this picture itself, a simple crop removing the foreground and putting the fish off center will improve this shot immensely.
Richard

_________________________________________
Nikon D2XS in a Subal
Negative Altitude Website

#3 derway

derway

    Great White

  • Member
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 1136 posts
  • Location:Pasadena CA

Posted 22 November 2004 - 04:26 PM

Hi. Welcome to wetpixel.

Nice exposure, (barely blew out the white band, but saved a lot of shadow detail that way), nice focus, nice clarity.

I to like the subject and setting, but I would do a couple of things differently, for shooting.

I think it often looks better if you get down as close to even, or sometimes below, the horizontal level of the subject, so you are looking flat or up at it. The slight downward angle of your shot, I think detracts from connecting with the subject.

Also, the angle of the fish's head, is dead straight on, so you don't get any sense of a face. I generally prefer at least somewhat of an angle, of the fish more from the 3/4 front, or side...

Hope this helps.
Don
Don Erway
http://picasaweb.google.com/onederway/
http://www.pbase.com/derway

nikon n90s/ikelite housing/twin SS-200 canon G2/ikelite/DS-50/optical TTL slave
sony V3/ikelite/DS-51/Heinrich DA2 slave

#4 ernstrohm

ernstrohm

    Hermit Crab

  • Member
  • Pip
  • 4 posts

Posted 24 November 2004 - 05:48 AM

hello ernst I think you should may stop photography cos you ain't very good. Admit, go and try...

#5 ernstrohm

ernstrohm

    Hermit Crab

  • Member
  • Pip
  • 4 posts

Posted 24 November 2004 - 05:49 AM

You are quite sad aren't you trying to get advice on a photo