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intrigating, breathtaking, fascinating, moving, stunning .... top class work Bruno.

The only thing I would change is the very last shot,where the bubbles float to the surface. IMO it doesn't belong there. It's slightly distracting. The rest is just .... well fantastic.

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I'd go with Outstanding! I'm not clear on something though Bruno. Are you asking for recommendations to improvements or have you locked it down?

 

Steve :o

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Thanks guys!

 

We can change/improve the clip till the closing date 5 april, so shoot!

 

Peter, indeed the last shot i had the same feeling, we will see what we can do there!

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Congratulations. With just a few days left...

I think it's the immediate blackness/tonality of the final bubble shot that is jarring... doesn't seem to fit with the other UW sequences.

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I think it's the immediate blackness/tonality of the final bubble shot that is jarring... doesn't seem to fit with the other UW sequences.

 

I was thinking the same thing. If there was way to sequence a transition from the blue to the black it might help tie it together. I also found the purple water of the surface shot could be improved but that's really nit picking. I bet you guys had a great time making it. Congrats!

 

Steve

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Nice editing and nice music choice.

Great work.

Congrats :o

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